REVIEW OCTOBER MEETING
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Guild Meeting Notes
From October Meeting 10/9/2024
Writers Guild October Special Meeting Review
October 9, 2024
The October meeting of the Writers Guild featured a special program with guest speaker Michelle Castleberry, a talented writer and clinical social worker. Michelle's presentation focused on the topic of Introspection in Writing, both for developing fictional characters and as a tool for writers themselves.
Meeting Overview:
Michelle began by having attendees introduce themselves and share their writing ambitions, creating a warm and interactive atmosphere.
She shared some personal background, including her upbringing on an Arkansas tomato farm and her experience with an adopted sister and hearing-impaired brother.
She then read an original poem that told a story about thoughts of experiencing sound from her brother's perspective, which served as a poignant introduction to the main topic.
Key Points on Introspection:
1. Definition and etymology of introspection as examining one's own mental processes.
2. The power and potential pitfalls of interior thought in character development.
3. How introspection can lead to conflict when based on mistaken assumptions about others' motives.
4. The importance of "what" questions over "why" questions in moving characters forward.
5. Various types of interior thought that can be used in writing, including:
- A-ha moments
- Diary/journal entries
- Interior monologue
- Stream of consciousness
- Daydreaming
- Unbidden thoughts
Practical Application:
Michelle provided a scenario demonstrating how a character's introspection can build tension in a story. She encouraged attendees to brainstorm 3-5 situations where characters' introspection could drive conflict, growth, or action. The situations lead to intriguing discussions about rounding characters by layering character core values and communication styles.
Take-Home Exercise:
Attendees were given a list of 120 reflective writing prompts, originally designed for self-discovery, to use as a tool for developing more substantial characters.
Conclusion:
Michelle Castleberry's presentation offered valuable insights into the use of introspection in writing, providing both theoretical understanding and practical techniques. Her unique background as both a writer and clinical social worker brought depth to the discussion, making for an engaging and informative session that was well-received by Guild members.
The meeting successfully combined literary craft with psychological understanding, offering attendees new tools to enhance their character development and storytelling abilities.
–Charles
Self-Study Review
Writing Introspective Scenes
Bringing Introspection to Life
October 9, 2024
Summary:
The article discusses strategies for crafting engaging introspective scenes in writing. It acknowledges that these scenes can often be perceived as boring but emphasizes their importance in character development. The piece offers practical tips to make introspection more interesting, including giving characters something to react to, introducing clear dilemmas, and creating definitive conclusions. It also suggests adding tension and conflict to enhance these scenes further.
Key Points:
Introspective scenes are crucial for character development but can be challenging to make interesting.
Give characters something specific to react to, serving as a catalyst for their thoughts.
Introduce a clear dilemma early in the scene to create tension and drive the introspection.
Ensure the scene leads to a clear conclusion or plan of action.
Add internal or external conflict to increase tension in introspective scenes.
Combine introspective scenes with other potentially "boring" scenes (e.g., transitional or traveling scenes) for a more dynamic narrative.
Effective introspection should reveal character, create tension, and drive the plot forward.
Writers are encouraged to apply these techniques to their own work to improve introspective scenes.
Discussion Questions with Answers
Discussion Questions with Answers
Writing Introspective Scenes
October 9, 2024
1. What are some common pitfalls writers face when crafting introspective scenes?
Writers often fall into the trap of making introspective scenes feel stagnant or boring. This can happen when there’s a lack of external conflict or when the character's thoughts meander without a clear purpose. Recognizing these pitfalls can help writers create more engaging scenes.
2. How can a catalyst enhance the effectiveness of an introspective scene?
A catalyst provides a trigger for the character's thoughts and emotions, making the introspection feel relevant and grounded. For instance, a significant event or conversation can spark a character's internal struggle, adding depth and urgency to the scene.
3. Why is it important to introduce a dilemma early in an introspective scene?
Introducing a dilemma early establishes tension and gives the reader a reason to invest in the character's thoughts. It creates a sense of conflict that propels the narrative forward, making the introspection feel purposeful rather than aimless.
4. In what ways can internal conflict be used to add tension to introspective scenes?
Internal conflict can create a dynamic struggle within the character, as they grapple with opposing thoughts or feelings. This tension can make the introspective scene more engaging, as readers witness the character's journey toward resolution or understanding.
5. How can a clear conclusion impact the reader's experience of an introspective scene?
A clear conclusion provides closure and direction, allowing the reader to see the character's growth or change. It can also set the stage for future events in the narrative, making the introspective scene feel like a vital part of the story rather than a detour.
6. What techniques can writers use to combine introspective scenes with action or dialogue?
Writers can intersperse introspective thoughts with dialogue or action, creating a more dynamic narrative. For example, a character might reflect on their feelings while engaging in a conversation, allowing the introspection to feel more integrated into the story.
7. How can a character's flaws influence their introspective journey?
A character's flaws can serve as the foundation for their internal struggles, making their introspection relatable and authentic. By exploring these flaws, writers can deepen the reader's understanding of the character and their motivations.
8. What role does reader investment play in the effectiveness of introspective scenes?
Reader investment is crucial; if readers care about the character, they are more likely to engage with their introspective moments. Building a strong connection between the reader and the character can enhance the impact of the introspection.
9. Can you think of a literary example where introspection was effectively used? What made it successful?
One example is Holden Caulfield in "The Catcher in the Rye." His introspective moments reveal his deep-seated fears and insecurities, making his character relatable. The combination of his internal conflict and the external events around him keeps the reader engaged.
10. How can writers experiment with different techniques to improve their introspective scenes?
Writers can try varying the pacing, incorporating sensory details, or using different narrative perspectives. Experimenting with these elements can help find the right balance between introspection and action, ultimately enhancing the scene's effectiveness.